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Unseen

May 23, 2010
By Ender PLATINUM, Hagerstown, Maryland
Ender PLATINUM, Hagerstown, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
Perhaps it's impossible to wear an identity without becoming what you pretend to be
-Orson Scott Card


I miss the days of being invisible.
No one cared, but it was better than this;
this is a different kind of miserable.
Now, never ending gazes of piercing judgment,
that could rip the strongest to shreds, lay upon me.
This is what I wanted; no accident.
I wanted to be larger, stronger,
brighter, shining, glowing.
I didn't want to be the wall flower any longer.
My whole life, I've been on the sidelines
watching and waiting.
I was given the opportunity and should have declined.
I was given the chance.
I want to give it back.



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on Jun. 17 2010 at 8:26 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

That was soooo good ! Don't stop writing your so good :) Come check out my poems , thank youu :)

on Jun. 16 2010 at 11:38 am
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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this is soooo amazing (one suggestion though- the title was slightly generic)  :)

on Jun. 14 2010 at 10:59 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

I can so easily realte to this. I took that opportunity, I took a step out of my comfort zone, and realized this isnt what I wanted I just want to be where no one can see me, but it doesnt work the same way going back, its different, you cant just take a step back, because people will still judge you. I like this, it puts into words those feelings of hopelessness, helplessness, of not wanting, but giving in.