Life anew

False hope, Love fail's
Disater awaits, Your tears
Final day's, Your fears
Phantom's night, Wither away





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OffMyRocker... said...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 11:01 am
Yeah I agree. It's deep. I enjoyed the emotion.
 
Ally25 said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 6:18 pm
The poem is so short. But it means alot. Good job.Keep writing.
 
Bloodlust replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 10:29 am
you actualy like it?
 
Ally25 replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 10:59 am

Yeah it was good. :)

 

 
Bloodlust replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 12:57 pm
i was writing random stuff each line is from bits and pieces of other poems that i never completed and i made them into one
 
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