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Life anew

May 20, 2010
Bloodlust BRONZE,
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the world turns its back agianst you you turn your back agianst the world


False hope, Love fail's
Disater awaits, Your tears
Final day's, Your fears
Phantom's night, Wither away



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on Aug. 6 2010 at 12:57 pm
Bloodlust BRONZE,
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Favorite Quote:
When the world turns its back agianst you you turn your back agianst the world

i was writing random stuff each line is from bits and pieces of other poems that i never completed and i made them into one

on Aug. 6 2010 at 11:01 am
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

Yeah I agree. It's deep. I enjoyed the emotion.

Riley141 GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 10:59 am
Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
13 articles 3 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Always do right. This will gratifiy some people and astonish the rest." Mark Twain

Yeah it was good. :)

 


on Aug. 6 2010 at 10:29 am
Bloodlust BRONZE,
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the world turns its back agianst you you turn your back agianst the world

you actualy like it?

Riley141 GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 6:18 pm
Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
13 articles 3 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Always do right. This will gratifiy some people and astonish the rest." Mark Twain

The poem is so short. But it means alot. Good job.Keep writing.