May 11, 2010
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I believed.
I had hope.
But now I realize I've been deceived.
You fed me.
A big lie.
And all of my life I just didn't see.
What you've done.
To yourself.
Continueing to fight, telling yourself you've won.
I can't heal.
The open scars just won't seal.
All this talk.
Means nothing.
To the people who stand to point and mock.
I don't know.
What to do.
Now that I have no place to go.
I should know.
Better now.
Than to trust whatever comes out of your mouth.
I have learned.
A lesson.
Than to speak to the back that you have turned.

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IamtheStargirl said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 12:58 pm

Very interesting, I can relate to some lines.

You are great writer as well as an amazing artist.

fragileblackorchid said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 2:41 pm
another good poem im surprised no one else commented the losers lol jk
TinFoilHeart This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 4:42 pm

Haha...yeah i don't get meany comments on my writing, mostly on my art though :/

I work on harder on my writing though....:/

fragileblackorchid replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 11:37 am
at least u get comments i only have like 3 comments haha but my art isn't all that great and yeah i work harder on my poems then my drawings too
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