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Realize

May 11, 2010
By SlippedFromSanity PLATINUM, Aleppo, Other
SlippedFromSanity PLATINUM, Aleppo, Other
45 articles 0 photos 15 comments

I believed.
I had hope.
But now I realize I've been deceived.
You fed me.
A big lie.
And all of my life I just didn't see.
What you've done.
To yourself.
Continueing to fight, telling yourself you've won.
I can't heal.
Anymore.
The open scars just won't seal.
All this talk.
Means nothing.
To the people who stand to point and mock.
I don't know.
What to do.
Now that I have no place to go.
I should know.
Better now.
Than to trust whatever comes out of your mouth.
I have learned.
A lesson.
Than to speak to the back that you have turned.



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on Aug. 10 2010 at 11:37 am
fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
7 articles 82 photos 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
People want to know why I do this, why I write such gross stuff. I like to tell them I have the heart of a small boy... and I keep it in a jar on my desk.
-Stephen King :P
The trust of the innocent is the liar's most useful tool.
-Stephen King
Now that we're here,
It's so far away
All the struggle we thought was in vain
All the mistakes,
One life contained
They all finally start to go away
Now that we're here its so far away
And I feel like I can face the day
I can forgive and I’m not ashamed to be the person that I am today

at least u get comments i only have like 3 comments haha but my art isn't all that great and yeah i work harder on my poems then my drawings too

on Aug. 9 2010 at 12:58 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Very interesting, I can relate to some lines.

You are great writer as well as an amazing artist.


on Aug. 8 2010 at 4:42 pm
SlippedFromSanity PLATINUM, Aleppo, Other
45 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Haha...yeah i don't get meany comments on my writing, mostly on my art though :/

I work on harder on my writing though....:/


on Aug. 3 2010 at 2:41 pm
fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
7 articles 82 photos 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
People want to know why I do this, why I write such gross stuff. I like to tell them I have the heart of a small boy... and I keep it in a jar on my desk.
-Stephen King :P
The trust of the innocent is the liar's most useful tool.
-Stephen King
Now that we're here,
It's so far away
All the struggle we thought was in vain
All the mistakes,
One life contained
They all finally start to go away
Now that we're here its so far away
And I feel like I can face the day
I can forgive and I’m not ashamed to be the person that I am today

another good poem im surprised no one else commented the losers lol jk