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Paradise Island

May 9, 2010
By KristinM. BRONZE, Grand Rapids, Michigan
KristinM. BRONZE, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is short, eat more CHOCOLATE!"


I’m on a paradise island,
My favorite place to be,
I love the sand, the sun, the big and beautiful sea.
The wind is so refreshing,
The water is so blue,
I watch some tiny sea turtles waddle two by two.
I lie in the sun by day and under the stars at night,
I listen to the waves as I fly a yellow kite,
I love this place. It’s perfect!
It is just right for me,
I could lay here forever by the big and beautiful sea.



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on Jun. 2 2010 at 11:40 am
HannahXO BRONZE, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is good"

Great job Kristin!! Thanks for commenting on my poem too. Congrats on getting published it's a really good poem!!

on Jun. 2 2010 at 10:31 am
Beautiful poem,Kristin.You are talented and smart!See you on your island.

on May. 30 2010 at 8:07 am
That is beautiful.  You are talented.  Keep on writing!  Congratulations on getting your poem published.

on May. 28 2010 at 7:20 pm
LUV IT KRISTEN!! i'm so glad you got published! i haven't heard back yet.... Waaaa.. oh well! I love your poem!