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Blood

October 10, 2007
By Anonymous

Slice after slice,
the pain feels so nice,
she's going through a transaction,
and feels a satisfaction.

The pain is intense,
the feeling is right,
she cuts and cuts,
until it becomes night.

She continues to cut,
she can't stop,
she cut's too deep,
and is watching the blood drops.

She feels pleasure,
she feels pain,
she feels satisfied,
she feels ashamed.

When she cuts she awakes,
awakes from a dark sleep, feeling numb,
cold,
lonely.

She cannot trust anyone,
she's misunderstood,
she is confused,
so she befriended the razor.


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on Jul. 10 2011 at 3:02 am
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

I relate so much it isnt funny. I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was shocking how... it made me think of myself. This is amazing.


on Jan. 21 2011 at 12:12 am
Romanticish SILVER, Irving, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Dreams are true while they last, and do we not live in dreams?
-Alfred lord tennyson

love it, love the fact that im the first to comment xD. you wrote this beautifully, and it really describes how people feel when the get tat way, it feels personall to me and whoever reads it, i cant wait to read other stuff you write. great poem, good luck