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"Drowning Out the Song of a Whippoorwill"

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For once, speechless.
As always, senseless.
Breathless
In your presence.
Lacking vocal skills.
Fainting against my will.
It’s not fair, the way you make me feel
As though I’m a child held still.
So, thank you Mr. Fear.
You in all your dark clothing, your voice so shrill,
Drowning out the song of a whippoorwill.




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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 14, 2010 at 8:51 am:
I like this one aslo. "for once spechless, as always senseless"-very nice. i like the whippoorwill metaphor simile thingy. very unique. 5 stars captain.
 
Starrlyt replied...
May 14, 2010 at 11:59 am :
Thanks. OMG this one just got accepted to be published in a book. Who knew a small town girl like me could even make myself heard?!?!?
 
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