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i don't know what to write
> >> and i dont know what to say
> >> I tried to cling on to that bit of hope
> >
but things got in the way
> >>
> >> i can write about these notions
> >> and i act like i really see
> >> but the truth is that i'm clueless
> >> what if it was me?
> >>
> >> the family must be grieving
> >> and they must be torn apart
> >> i just don't know to think
> >> but I feel this pain inside my heart
> >>
> >> people act like life's a given
> >> but its precious if its lost
> >> happiness is payback time
> >> and i guess you were the cost
> >>
> >> i didn't know you at all before
> >> so how can i feel this pain?
> >> thunderstorms poured down on us
> >> memories washed away with rain
> >>
> >> it just seems so unfair sometimes
> >> your life went by so fast
> > appreciation of each moment
> > from your first breath to your last
> >>
> >> my problems seem so incomparable
> >> my mother starts to cry
> >> and everybody asks themselves
> >> one simple question
> >> Why?

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ashbash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 12:22 pm:
not only do i love the way this is written and the words you used and the emotion given off, but i also love the message your sending through this. wonderful job, this is beautiful, five stars.
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Schubster said...
Aug. 10, 2009 at 7:00 pm:
i loved the great rhyming....and all your poems! it's so true and just....amazing is all i can really say. great work, once again.
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aubrey63 said...
Aug. 5, 2009 at 5:11 pm:
this poem was fabulous! it was great! i loved the rhyme scheme and everything flowed together beautifully, even the story! keep writing beautifully like this!
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