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What Is Love?

March 27, 2010
By homecommingstarr SILVER, Tampa, Florida
homecommingstarr SILVER, Tampa, Florida
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LOVE
I see it all around me
it's peaceful ,quiet
and nerve raking

you can express it in many ways
some say it's just what a person needs
but for me its lies

LOVE
it can cause misery
just like in twilight
its difficult
it punches a whole in your chest

I don't believe in it
it's nothing i wanted to experience
sure it makes no scince

But from all i scene is fairy tales
they have happy endings
but this is life
no magic, no fairy godmother

Love
I don't know what it is or if it is real but what I do know is I hope I never understand


The author's comments:
I wrote this after i seen a couple fighting on tv and it kinda upset me even though it was just a show

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on Dec. 5 2010 at 6:37 pm
mwahxandxmwa SILVER, Melbourne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Silence is golden...duct tape is silver" - a random T-shirt

I like the idea in which you are getting at. Yeah sometimes spelling mistakes are  annoying, but they happen. Personally I would change the reference to twilight, although that is personal preference. Although it has a really solid concept! Great MWAH :D

on Jul. 20 2010 at 12:31 am
homecommingstarr SILVER, Tampa, Florida
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this poem is a typo