Imaginary World

April 18, 2010
By TNicole1995 BRONZE, New Britain, Connecticut
TNicole1995 BRONZE, New Britain, Connecticut
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Walking through the cold, bitter air
You are walking down that road again
Past the huge trees and into the woods we used to play in as young kids
Unaware of the dangers that lie ahead

Thinking that this is the forest from your dream
The one with many fantasies
But instead darkness surrounds you

Instead of feeling comfort
You feel scared and lost
Feeling the darkness cover you like a blanket

Looking where you came in from and cant find it
Suddenly feeling lost in a place you thought was a world of fantasies
Wishing you can turn back around
Wishing you never came into the woods
This is nothing like the dream you had
Realizing you should have counted on reality
This is not an imaginary world

The author's comments:
I just started writing poetry not to long ago.I hope people like it!

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This article has 3 comments.

j.brown said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 4:35 pm
That was deep, one of the best iv heard in a while

Sean Ro said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 2:21 pm
I had no idea you were this good!
Blew my mind a bit, keep it up! :)

on Jul. 28 2011 at 1:50 pm
This poem is simply amazing good work ! 


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