Help me...

April 16, 2010
By Anonymous

I sit here and I fall apart.
And all the while,
I want to restart.
I haven't been all I can be,
Can't you see this isnt me?
I scream and scream for help to come,
But I hear nothing from no-one.
I never planned this mess I made,
Oh boy, what a price I've payed.
The tears, the blood.
The sorrow, the rain.
No matter what I feel,
It's still my pain.
All the hate,anger and frustration inside,
All of it makes me want to cry.
But eventually I won't need to hide
And soon enough I will begin to die



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I_Am_Me96 GOLD said...
on May. 23 2010 at 3:32 pm
I_Am_Me96 GOLD, Lake Station, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Fall in love or fall in hate. Get inspired or be depressed. Ace a test or flunk a class. Make babies or make art. Speak the truth or lie and cheat. Dance on tables or sit in the corner. Life is divine Chaos. Embrace it. Forgive yourself. Breathe."

keep adding poems and when they get accepted, take a lok at them. AND THANK YOU! :D

on May. 6 2010 at 8:10 pm
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger

ohmygod. im so jelous. your rhyming was nt only amaxing but smooth and made sense and wasnt SIMPLE somthing that takes talent i just wish there were more to read. ps could you return the favor and critiq me too :D

I_Am_Me96 GOLD said...
on May. 6 2010 at 5:37 pm
I_Am_Me96 GOLD, Lake Station, Indiana
13 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fall in love or fall in hate. Get inspired or be depressed. Ace a test or flunk a class. Make babies or make art. Speak the truth or lie and cheat. Dance on tables or sit in the corner. Life is divine Chaos. Embrace it. Forgive yourself. Breathe."

haha, yeah. i am full of emotions...most crazy and insane. :D lol. thanks

Yoyo96 said...
on May. 6 2010 at 5:25 pm
Yoyo96, Lake Station, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't frown. You never know who is falling in love with your smile."
"When it hurts to look back, and you're scared to look ahead, you can look beside you and your best friend will be there"

i loved it. so emotionally great. :D

I_Am_Me96 GOLD said...
on May. 6 2010 at 5:13 pm
I_Am_Me96 GOLD, Lake Station, Indiana
13 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fall in love or fall in hate. Get inspired or be depressed. Ace a test or flunk a class. Make babies or make art. Speak the truth or lie and cheat. Dance on tables or sit in the corner. Life is divine Chaos. Embrace it. Forgive yourself. Breathe."

Thanx. :) it was just something i thought of. it was interesting.

on May. 6 2010 at 3:51 pm
msztweetybabii PLATINUM, Mattapan, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"No man, for any considerable period, can wear one face to himself and another to the multitude, without finally getting bewildered as to which may be the true."- Natheniel Hawthorne.

alot of emotion was put into this! :) wow. i love it. if this is from your point of view..don't feel that way..God can help you.

oooo yeahhh..please comment any of my poems please and thank you



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