Help me...

April 16, 2010
By , lake station, IN
I sit here and I fall apart.
And all the while,
I want to restart.
I haven't been all I can be,
Can't you see this isnt me?
I scream and scream for help to come,
But I hear nothing from no-one.
I never planned this mess I made,
Oh boy, what a price I've payed.
The tears, the blood.
The sorrow, the rain.
No matter what I feel,
It's still my pain.
All the hate,anger and frustration inside,
All of it makes me want to cry.
But eventually I won't need to hide
And soon enough I will begin to die





Join the Discussion

This article has 6 comments. Post your own now!

babigerl1194 said...
May 6, 2010 at 8:10 pm
ohmygod. im so jelous. your rhyming was nt only amaxing but smooth and made sense and wasnt SIMPLE somthing that takes talent i just wish there were more to read. ps could you return the favor and critiq me too :D
 
I_am_me96 replied...
May 23, 2010 at 3:32 pm
keep adding poems and when they get accepted, take a lok at them. AND THANK YOU! :D
 
msztweetybabii said...
May 6, 2010 at 3:51 pm

alot of emotion was put into this! :) wow. i love it. if this is from your point of view..don't feel that way..God can help you.

oooo yeahhh..please comment any of my poems please and thank you

 
I_am_me96 replied...
May 6, 2010 at 5:13 pm
Thanx. :) it was just something i thought of. it was interesting.
 
Yoyo96 replied...
May 6, 2010 at 5:25 pm
i loved it. so emotionally great. :D
 
I_am_me96 replied...
May 6, 2010 at 5:37 pm
haha, yeah. i am full of emotions...most crazy and insane. :D lol. thanks
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback