My Modern Fairytale

April 8, 2010
You called me to say hello on Saturday morning
I woke from my slumber when I heard the phone ring
I was Sleeping Beauty.
You held my shoes for me as I put them on at homecoming
I had previously taken them off so we could dance
I was Cinderella.
You picked me up and carried me out to the car
I held onto you and enjoyed the ride
I was Snow White.

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pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 5:40 am
aw this is so cute(:
xXBrokenxNightmareXx said...
Sept. 28, 2010 at 10:46 am
Normally I don't like poetry like this but.....In this case I do o.o.....Soooo.....REAL good job....It actually made me smile a bit xD
jlw11 said...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 12:42 pm
Aw! This was so cute! I really enjoyed it!!! (:
beautifuldisaster18 said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 8:47 pm
This is so cute! I love it!
lovetowriteandwatchTV said...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 10:08 am

good job keep writing u can just see the smile on her face when that was all happening


WritingLoverForever replied...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 11:33 am
What do you mean "her"? I was the girl that all of this was happening to.
lovetowriteandwatchTV replied...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 10:30 am
oh, well then i could see the smile on ur face
WritingLoverForever said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 11:06 am
Thanks. I honestly thought this poem was a bit cheesy, so it's nice that at least someone likes it. haha
alenkaaa said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 10:48 am
really cutee!
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