Extended Simile

April 8, 2010
By Crissy GOLD, Jerome, Idaho
Crissy GOLD, Jerome, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"Life Goes On!"

We were like carrots in a stew
trying hard not to be the last one left
making sure not to be the first one eaten
finding it hard to stop the pain
soothing ourselves while destroying the other
saying nothing but the message is clear
helping the other would be a big mistake

The author's comments:
This was an English assignment for an extended simile. It's about two friends who have recently become enemies and they try not to become friends again.

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