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April 7, 2010
By XXXXXShIaNeNeIsMeXXXXX SILVER, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
XXXXXShIaNeNeIsMeXXXXX SILVER, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"love is complicated but wonderful"


Here I am sitting in my room crying for you
My friends tell me to get over you but how when you were my first love
Your not that special to other girls but to me your my world
My brother tells me he'll kick your butt along with my dad but Why when you did nothing
Here I am sitting in my room.......... crying......... over some stupid guy



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on Sep. 13 2010 at 7:52 pm
ForeverFelix PLATINUM, Catasauqua, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Daydreams can be worse than nightmares, but that never stops me.

I think this is kind of random...as if it's just your thoughts and not a poem, jumping all over the place yet all falling around the same topic. If that makes sense. Not bad =)

on Jul. 30 2010 at 7:37 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
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Part of the J7X team. :)

I like this, it comes straight from the heart. <33 Good job!

on Jul. 30 2010 at 7:34 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

This was really good, I could feel the sadness and the emotion, the brother and dad part was funny. I love the last line.  Great job.


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