April 7, 2010
Here I am sitting in my room crying for you
My friends tell me to get over you but how when you were my first love
Your not that special to other girls but to me your my world
My brother tells me he'll kick your butt along with my dad but Why when you did nothing
Here I am sitting in my room.......... crying......... over some stupid guy

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CallMeFelix said...
Sept. 13, 2010 at 7:52 pm
I think this is kind of random...as if it's just your thoughts and not a poem, jumping all over the place yet all falling around the same topic. If that makes sense. Not bad =)
A.Dreamer said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 7:37 pm
I like this, it comes straight from the heart. <33 Good job!
gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 7:34 pm
This was really good, I could feel the sadness and the emotion, the brother and dad part was funny. I love the last line.  Great job.
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