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you come home to the same thing every day.
the same place, the same atmosphere, the same everything.
then one day you walk in the door, and something is missing.
something or someone that you would never expect to be gone, you never thought that you would have to live without.
one day you walk through the door, and your whole life has changed, all because they are gone.




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Jade-McKaye said...
May 25, 2010 at 10:16 am:
you too :)
 
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Dale said...
May 24, 2010 at 5:48 pm:
I'm livin' it this past week Jade - who would have known? Good to see you this last weekend.
 
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Kairah027 said...
May 14, 2010 at 2:59 pm:
This is beautiful, I absolutly adore it :) Please check out some of my stuff i'd love you're opinion <3
 
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sammie1997 said...
May 6, 2010 at 5:38 am:
That was deep :) I love it! 
 
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2112 said...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 9:40 am:
Wow. I know that feeling well. Through grief and sorrow we can gain strength, wisdom and understanding. Sometimes it just does not feel that way.
 
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soccerchickunc said...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 6:52 pm:
this is really amazing i know where you're coming from. you have amazing talent i love the flow (: could you check out my poem an escape & give me feedback? thanks (:
 
Jade-McKaye replied...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 7:58 pm :
thanks =)
of course, i'd love to.
 
KevinM replied...
May 7, 2010 at 7:10 pm :
jade i love this poem and i am honored to have my poem in your top 5 poems 
 
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