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Roses are red violets are blue,
I feel like I'm searching for something that isn't true,
I believed in love only when I was with you. You made me feel so alive,
I know sometimes you made me cry,
I didn't care that you made me feel like I wanted to die.
Now I feel even worse,
its been awhile and the pain still hurts.
Why did you have to go behind my back?
And I still took you back after that.
Thanks for making me look stupid,
I know you weren't pressured to do it.
Why did you hurt me, after I tried to be the best I can,
I still wasn't good enough to knock you off your feet.
I guess I wasn't good enough for you, unlike him,
I never pressured you to do things you never wanted to do.
But that's the type of guys you like,
the ones that don't know how to treat a lady right.
I got one more question.
In the future when my success comes,
who's going to be the one you really loved?



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princessness_16 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 9:38 am:
the first line is so cliche.
 
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always-sunshine said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 9:49 am:
very good!!!!!!
 
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Bluerain said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 9:03 pm:
wow this is really good!i love the ending
 
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babigerl1194 said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 8:07 pm:
ok this is absolutely genuis. i love it. love it. love it.
 
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pepsilover said...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 8:56 pm:

I really love love love this!!! Keep writing!!!

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