Can I Get An Answer?

April 2, 2010
By Nevada BRONZE, Watsonivlle, California
Nevada BRONZE, Watsonivlle, California
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So I'm grindin' with my eyes wide
Looking to find
A way
Through the day
A life
For the night- lil wayne


Roses are red violets are blue,
I feel like I'm searching for something that isn't true,
I believed in love only when I was with you. You made me feel so alive,
I know sometimes you made me cry,
I didn't care that you made me feel like I wanted to die.
Now I feel even worse,
its been awhile and the pain still hurts.
Why did you have to go behind my back?
And I still took you back after that.
Thanks for making me look stupid,
I know you weren't pressured to do it.
Why did you hurt me, after I tried to be the best I can,
I still wasn't good enough to knock you off your feet.
I guess I wasn't good enough for you, unlike him,
I never pressured you to do things you never wanted to do.
But that's the type of guys you like,
the ones that don't know how to treat a lady right.
I got one more question.
In the future when my success comes,
who's going to be the one you really loved?


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on Apr. 29 2010 at 9:38 am
princessness_16 SILVER, Dundee, New York
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the first line is so cliche.

on Apr. 20 2010 at 9:49 am
kissingdarkness SILVER, Mill Creek, Oklahoma
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lets see............ be yourself

very good!!!!!!

on Apr. 19 2010 at 9:03 pm
aliveonink GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
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wow this is really good!i love the ending

on Apr. 19 2010 at 8:07 pm
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
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wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger

ok this is absolutely genuis. i love it. love it. love it.

on Apr. 16 2010 at 8:56 pm
pepsilover BRONZE, Eau Claire, Wisconsin
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I really love love love this!!! Keep writing!!!

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