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Revolution

We live in a country where democracy's acceptable,
As if our candidates are electable,
Does racism exist? Yes but its limited,
It's classism thats spread, in your face and intimate,
The time has come, we've slowed due to bureaucracy,
So dumbly naming a black hole as democracy,
Tighten your belt, get up and get ready,
It's time for revolution to make this nation steady,
My words may be harsh, but they arte true,
Each person fight for people, like me and you



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Ryan.J.Campos said...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 8:33 am
I think you just quoted Immortal Technique :) good political artists.
 
JeanGrey2 said...
May 3, 2010 at 9:39 pm
*claps* 5 stars!!
 
LostAngel said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 9:44 pm
That was a great piece of work right there :)  I would ask you to read some of my work but you probably won't like any of it due to the fact that it's all about guys. Well keep writing, you have talent.
 
salamander254 replied...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 5:00 pm
thank you :)
 
Supernova7 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:17 pm
This is so true i really liked it:) would you mind commenting on my work?
 
salamander254 replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 11:24 am
id love to comment on your work, and thank you
 
salamander254 replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 11:25 am
one thing ppl dont usually notice is that the first letter in each line spell out "War, its time"
 
Supernova7 replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 6:04 pm
Really? I hadn't noticed
 
ZebraWithoutStripes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 7:46 pm
sweetness! i like this one :)
 
salamander254 replied...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 5:13 pm
thank you :)
 
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