Screams Unheard

March 26, 2010
By Frog-Prince PLATINUM, Lakeside, California
Frog-Prince PLATINUM, Lakeside, California
33 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Peace is not the absence of conflict, but the ability to cope with it"


My screams go unheard
Through the cold of night,
And I'm left with just the memory
Of your face.

And it's ripping holes
In my wounded heart,
And as the blood plunges
To Earth I can hear you.

Nothing I can do could take away
This thought inside my head,
It's haunting me still
I hate my life.

But I hate you more,
Because you made me
Who I am today,
I owe this hell to you.

Don't tell me this is for the best,
I don't believe a word you say,
Your quivering lips mean nothing,
I've already lost my life.

In the end you will answer
For what you have done,
Until then I hope it kills you
To see the photos of my face.



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on May. 9 2010 at 7:53 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

wow, that poem was AWESOMELY GREAT!! :D i mean, wow

on May. 3 2010 at 8:16 pm
thatotherguygirl GOLD, Sherman Oaks, California
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Favorite Quote:
“I will bring you flowers from the mountains, bluebells,
dark hazels, and rustic baskets of kisses.
I want to do with you
what spring does with the cherry trees.”
-Pablo Neruda

...wow.

just...wow.

i absolutely love this.

mesmerizing and inspiring... i'm literally speechless. which, if you knew me, you would know is not something that happens very often, so kudos to you :D


on Apr. 29 2010 at 8:17 pm
EllenaPfeffer SILVER, North Oaks, Minnesota
5 articles 258 photos 234 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dreams you Follow

Yup Writing is your Talent!

on Apr. 28 2010 at 8:19 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
20 articles 0 photos 268 comments

Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we're doing it- Neil Gaiman.
Who are you to be who you are?-Le'Na Pernell

^ Jynxx agrees with shafer15. i could really feel the message. =]

on Apr. 24 2010 at 2:47 pm
lilly_valley GOLD, Shiloh, Ohio
11 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of chocolates...you never know what your gonna get. :)

This is awesome. I love the dark element of it. It's just so mezmerizing. When I read this it was like I was feeling all of it. If that makes any sense.

on Apr. 20 2010 at 11:10 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

absolutely love all of your work!!!!! it'd be gr8 if you could comment on my other stuff too plz!! thx!

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 4:13 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

I really like this, and especially the picture you chose with this. Nice job!

:D


NikkiBaby95 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:28 am
Good job. It has alot of emotion in this poem.. I liked it (:

on Apr. 13 2010 at 4:48 pm
all_boys_hate_me BRONZE, Miamisburg, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 18 comments
ok then fine I didn't want to know anyways

on Apr. 13 2010 at 3:21 pm
Frog-Prince PLATINUM, Lakeside, California
33 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Peace is not the absence of conflict, but the ability to cope with it"

Uhmmm...wel I guess this means that my inspiration will have to be "dark, morbid, sinsiter, and broding" as well =) I'm not telling

on Apr. 13 2010 at 7:06 am
all_boys_hate_me BRONZE, Miamisburg, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 18 comments
I loved it. Very...oh what's the word...intreguing(I don't think I spelled it right but who cares) What ws your inspiration for this poem?

JeanGrey GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 12:38 am
JeanGrey GOLD, Mason City, Iowa
10 articles 0 photos 258 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am so clever that sometimes I don't understand a single word of what I am saying."-Oscar Wilde

Dark, morbid, sinister, broding, I Like it :) Good work :)


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