Screams Unheard

March 26, 2010
My screams go unheard
Through the cold of night,
And I'm left with just the memory
Of your face.

And it's ripping holes
In my wounded heart,
And as the blood plunges
To Earth I can hear you.

Nothing I can do could take away
This thought inside my head,
It's haunting me still
I hate my life.

But I hate you more,
Because you made me
Who I am today,
I owe this hell to you.

Don't tell me this is for the best,
I don't believe a word you say,
Your quivering lips mean nothing,
I've already lost my life.

In the end you will answer
For what you have done,
Until then I hope it kills you
To see the photos of my face.





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jonas_chick899 said...
May 9, 2010 at 7:53 am
wow, that poem was AWESOMELY GREAT!! :D i mean, wow
 
AnnikaElise said...
May 3, 2010 at 8:16 pm

...wow.

just...wow.

i absolutely love this.

mesmerizing and inspiring... i'm literally speechless. which, if you knew me, you would know is not something that happens very often, so kudos to you :D

 
Ellena P. said...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 8:17 pm
Yup Writing is your Talent!
 
shafer15 said...
Apr. 24, 2010 at 2:47 pm
This is awesome. I love the dark element of it. It's just so mezmerizing. When I read this it was like I was feeling all of it. If that makes any sense.
 
Jynxx replied...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 8:19 pm
^ Jynxx agrees with shafer15. i could really feel the message. =]
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 11:10 pm
absolutely love all of your work!!!!! it'd be gr8 if you could comment on my other stuff too plz!! thx!
 
ZAVERY said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 4:13 pm

I really like this, and especially the picture you chose with this. Nice job!

:D

 
all_boys_hate_me said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 7:06 am
I loved it. Very...oh what's the word...intreguing(I don't think I spelled it right but who cares) What ws your inspiration for this poem?
 
frog-prince replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 3:21 pm
Uhmmm...wel I guess this means that my inspiration will have to be "dark, morbid, sinsiter, and broding" as well =) I'm not telling
 
all_boys_hate_me replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 4:48 pm
ok then fine I didn't want to know anyways
 
JeanGrey said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 12:38 am
Dark, morbid, sinister, broding, I Like it :) Good work :)
 
NikkiBaby95 replied...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:28 am
Good job. It has alot of emotion in this poem.. I liked it (:
 
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