My First Love

March 24, 2010
By bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”


I know for now we parted ways and I wish the best for you
I hope deep down you really know that all my love was true
I don’t care what other people say, I think you were falling too
I know they’d never understand, unless they stood in my shoe
Cuz baby from my perspective everything was going great
I truly thought that we were brought together by fate
I still believe our love exists, I just think you’re afraid
I don’t blame you for losing faith, I know you’ve been betrayed
Trusting someone is always hard, you gotta no the bad from good
I don’t think your a bad person, just very misunderstood
I know you didn’t mean to hurt me, and I will never hold a grudge
I’m not like the others that label you, I’m not one to judge
After all your disappointment, you’re scared to let someone in
All your hope for love is gone, so you don’t let a new love begin
Because we got so close so quickly, you ran before you could get hurt
You realized that giant wall you built was caving in, so you became alert
I know you were intimidated, but I would never make you sad
I always wanted to see you smile, to make you feel so glad
You acted like a cocky player, and always hid your scar
But I know that it’s all a mask, that’s not really who you are
Behind that shield of male bravado, theres a sweet and sensitive guy
A man thats yearning for true love but’s too afraid to try
Loving someone is a risk, but no risk, no reward
When you feel those feelings babe, they cannot be ignored
You dwelled on your imperfections, and thought you weren’t good enough for me
But the truth is only you felt that way, with you I was as happy as can be
I guess for now you need to figure all this out on your own
One day you’ll see everything clearly, everything I have known
If theres one thing I can tell you, something you should always know
Something that you need to understand, in order for you to grow
Life is tough, so just be strong, but there’s always a bright side
True love is so precious and rare, so when you find it don’t run and hide...


The author's comments:
This was a poem I wrote about the first guy I loved to let my feelings out after we broke up.

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on Oct. 15 2010 at 12:48 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you! I love when people can relate to my work =)

on Sep. 6 2010 at 5:41 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

this is the way i felt when my boyfriend broke up with me!!!! great job!!!!

on Jun. 11 2010 at 6:10 am
musiclover123, ., Other
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Favorite Quote:
It is cruel, you know, that music should be so beautiful. It has the beauty of loneliness of pain: of strength and freedom. The beauty of disappointment and never-satisfied love. The cruel beauty of nature and everlasting beauty of monotony. <3

Hey i wrote a new poem its called Fire And Ice...id like to know what you think of it...ThxX =)

on Jun. 5 2010 at 1:38 am
musiclover123, ., Other
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It is cruel, you know, that music should be so beautiful. It has the beauty of loneliness of pain: of strength and freedom. The beauty of disappointment and never-satisfied love. The cruel beauty of nature and everlasting beauty of monotony. <3

DU-UDE ALL THREE OF THEM ROCK!!!SERIOUSLY FIVE STARS =)

on May. 27 2010 at 6:55 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thanks for reading all of them! I'm happy you like my poetry and i will most definitely check out you're other work and give advice =D

on May. 27 2010 at 12:07 am
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

i love your writing, read em all. you the best of the best. i love writing cuz you can become anyone you want, forgeting for a moment that things aren't going as you planned. but whenever i write i can't seem to leave out the anger so my stuff is sometimes dark to tell you the truth kinda depressing. that's why your comment made me happy when you said my poem made you laugh. it'd be cool if you could give me some advice on my other work, don't sugar it plz! ;D

on May. 14 2010 at 7:14 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

its this guy on teenink. he wrote the architect and some other stuff. I'm just saying-its an example how you could write something that doesnt rhyme and its still pretty good-though ii'm sure your stuff would make alot more sense than his....

on May. 14 2010 at 6:48 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Oh ok wat is mattrgs?

on May. 14 2010 at 6:38 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

the key is writing what you wanna say in a weird or different way-well thats my key, i dont know how to open your door. do you know mattrgs? you should read that stuff/your welcome captain.

on May. 14 2010 at 6:26 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Yea its hard for me to rite poems that dnt rhyme...i need to work on that lol but thanks for your comment =)

on May. 14 2010 at 6:10 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

you have a way reaching your audience captain-not that i know your audience,ut this is really emotional and warm and humid and i'm sure everybody will love that. 5 stars captain. you should try writing poems that dont rhyme-I have-its difficult..........

on May. 13 2010 at 6:21 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

ok =) 

on May. 13 2010 at 4:21 pm
Lexi, what's yours? we should email some time!! (i don't have a facebook :(

on May. 13 2010 at 10:37 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

heyy i just put another one up called Memories! let me no wat you think and please rate it =D

on May. 13 2010 at 10:23 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Wow that is a sick background! i dont think mine is as cool as that lol what's your name?

on May. 12 2010 at 4:03 pm
Yah i am!!! Wow that's awesome-I'm actual half too!! and i'm related to Winton Churchill!!! how's that for a backround??!!!

on May. 12 2010 at 10:32 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

awww thank you so much! =) i have 2 more up now called Memories and My Valentine and one called Silly Little Puppet that is pending rite now if u wanna check them out =D r u Egyptian? i was jw cuz of ur username cuz im actually half Egyptian lol

on May. 11 2010 at 7:00 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Wow, all of these comments are true(beeaach though???). You writing is so awesome i just love it and can't wait to read more

on May. 2 2010 at 11:41 pm
musiclover123, ., Other
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Favorite Quote:
It is cruel, you know, that music should be so beautiful. It has the beauty of loneliness of pain: of strength and freedom. The beauty of disappointment and never-satisfied love. The cruel beauty of nature and everlasting beauty of monotony. <3

Sure!!I think Im going to submit one more too!Its called Smile =)

on May. 1 2010 at 1:11 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

thank you very much! I will definitely look at yours too =D




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