All I Wanted

March 23, 2010
By JordanTaylaa GOLD, Stephens City, Virginia
JordanTaylaa GOLD, Stephens City, Virginia
12 articles 13 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Before you, my life was like a moonless night. very dark. but there were stars-- points of light and reason. and then you shot across my sky like a meteor. suddenly everything was on fire. there was brilliancy, there was beauty. when you were gone, the meteor had fallen over the horizon. everything went black. nothing had changed. but my eyes were blinded by the light. I couldn't see stars anymore."


Passing you everyday,
seeing your face.
Dying inside
when you look my way.
I can't stop liking you,
the feelings won't fade.
I just hope
you still feel the same way.
I had a boyfriend
and you're moving on...
but our mutual feelings,
are they really gone?
It's been a few weeks
since we last spoke,
but I was under pressure,
I just choked.
There was tons of confusion
filling my mind,
but liking you
wasn't a waste of my time.
I was stuck in some mud,
couldn't find a way out.
So, I gave up and let them
pull me out.
I thought It'd be easy
but it turned out so hard,
especially since
my feelings weren't gone.
I never meant
to break your heart.
I want to fix it,
I want to re-start.
All I wanted
was to be yours to hold,
'cause you may have flaws,
but your heart is gold.
Now I'm wishing
that you were here..
holding me,
loving me,
& this would all disappear.


The author's comments:
I had a boyfriend, but I started liking someone else. My friends didn't like him, and he had a bad reputation, but It was so hard to get away. It hurt me to see his face everyday at school, and know that inside I was wishing he was by my side.

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on Apr. 18 2010 at 6:07 pm
JordanTaylaa GOLD, Stephens City, Virginia
12 articles 13 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Before you, my life was like a moonless night. very dark. but there were stars-- points of light and reason. and then you shot across my sky like a meteor. suddenly everything was on fire. there was brilliancy, there was beauty. when you were gone, the meteor had fallen over the horizon. everything went black. nothing had changed. but my eyes were blinded by the light. I couldn't see stars anymore."

Yes it's sad that those kind of things can happen. Where people don't like the guy/girl you like and it just ruins everything. So dumb. Sorry that happened to you!

on Apr. 13 2010 at 8:41 pm
baumshell DIAMOND, Burbank, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I was thinking how nothing lasts and what a shame that is."-Benjamin Button

i can relate




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