my dreams

March 16, 2010
By darkened-love-writer PLATINUM, Morgantown, Kentucky
darkened-love-writer PLATINUM, Morgantown, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"WHY WASTE UR TIME TRYIN TO FIT IN WHEN U WERE MADE TO STAND OUT!!!"


I liked you
Now I love you
You’re the only one
Who takes my scars
And makes them vanish
I feel no pain
When I’m with you
I feel no shame
Cause I believe your love is true
As I lay down to sleep
I pray that we will meet
Cause in my dreams
We can be face to face
Where we can come out of our hiding place
Where I feel whole again
You’re unlike other men
You catch me when I fall
You let me know someone cares after all
You help me stay strong
You show me I don’t do everything wrong
You shield me from the things my parents say
You let me know it’ll be ok
Now I believe that I have fell for you
I think I’m in love with you
This I know to be true

The author's comments:
i had found someone that showed me affection and showed me love.

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on Sep. 22 2011 at 6:17 am
Ebony_Rose PLATINUM, Hot Springs, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
"The simplest way that i can understand therapy is that we're born a certain
way, we're taught to be something different, and we spend our whole lives
trying to unravel it and ultimately align ourselves with who we really are." ~Billy Corgan

That is just mean. :) I liked it, but there were some structural errors where you switched patterns without and go between which messed up the flow and I believe you could go deeper. :) Keep writing

justinbieber said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 8:14 am
justinbieber, Atlanta, Georgia
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gave all your articles a one learn to write u completly suck butt at it

Rayne GOLD said...
on Sep. 8 2011 at 5:00 pm
Rayne GOLD, Chippewa Falls, Wisconsin
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I like how you describe the contrast between before and after the boy. Cute:)




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