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my dreams

I liked you
Now I love you
You’re the only one
Who takes my scars
And makes them vanish
I feel no pain
When I’m with you
I feel no shame
Cause I believe your love is true
As I lay down to sleep
I pray that we will meet
Cause in my dreams
We can be face to face
Where we can come out of our hiding place
Where I feel whole again
You’re unlike other men
You catch me when I fall
You let me know someone cares after all
You help me stay strong
You show me I don’t do everything wrong
You shield me from the things my parents say
You let me know it’ll be ok
Now I believe that I have fell for you
I think I’m in love with you
This I know to be true




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justinbieber said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 8:14 am:
gave all your articles a one learn to write u completly suck butt at it
 
Ebony_Rose replied...
Sept. 22, 2011 at 6:17 am :
That is just mean. :) I liked it, but there were some structural errors where you switched patterns without and go between which messed up the flow and I believe you could go deeper. :) Keep writing
 
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Rayne said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 5:00 pm:
I like how you describe the contrast between before and after the boy. Cute:)
 
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