the world

March 20, 2010
“Help us“, cry the people of the world, to a earth long forgotten.

Forgotten to but a scattered few which, die each day.

Begging, They dance and sing, but the dance is wrong ,the song scrambled and dead.

the world falling around their heads still they just think of themselves and not of the things they've done.

They don’t think of the forgotten animals and plants even though that’s what started it all.

all the suffering and pain that could have been avoided.

The waters dried and the grass is dead nothing is left of the once "great people" that “ruled” this planet.

After the last person has danced and sung their self to an early grave. A bolt of lighting singles the next storm and the earth's next try at unselfish life.

The future or a possibility? You decide.

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SuNshiNe007 said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 10:27 am

Hey wow, this is good!!! I really like it:)


Medina D. said...
Feb. 26, 2011 at 8:21 pm

The words are strong and powerful, as is the message. And it really speaks out to people, directly. It sits them down and says "LISTEN IF YOU DONT DO THIS, THEN THIS IS GONNA HAPPEN" you really got that out just right.

But i wasn't feeling the poeticness of it (it doesnt mean this is a bad piece though i think it was well done. Maybe if you posted it in the what matters section of the site........)

i rated it too.

queentabbiecat99 replied...
Feb. 27, 2011 at 2:47 pm
thanks so much :D
queentabbiecat99 replied...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 10:41 am
anyone read this?
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