the world

March 20, 2010
By queentabbiecat99 GOLD, Dardanelle, Arkansas
queentabbiecat99 GOLD, Dardanelle, Arkansas
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Things aren't always what they seem.


“Help us“, cry the people of the world, to a earth long forgotten.

Forgotten to but a scattered few which, die each day.

Begging, They dance and sing, but the dance is wrong ,the song scrambled and dead.

the world falling around their heads still they just think of themselves and not of the things they've done.

They don’t think of the forgotten animals and plants even though that’s what started it all.

all the suffering and pain that could have been avoided.

The waters dried and the grass is dead nothing is left of the once "great people" that “ruled” this planet.

After the last person has danced and sung their self to an early grave. A bolt of lighting singles the next storm and the earth's next try at unselfish life.

The future or a possibility? You decide.


The author's comments:
its based on a different poem i wrote about how the earth called who cares. its about how if we don't change something soon we will be but a forgotten memory in the earth's history. how we need to look beyond our selfs and see the world how it really is a "living thing" that can change in a instant.

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on Apr. 29 2011 at 10:27 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Hey wow, this is good!!! I really like it:)

 


on Apr. 28 2011 at 10:41 am
queentabbiecat99 GOLD, Dardanelle, Arkansas
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Things aren't always what they seem.

anyone read this?

on Feb. 27 2011 at 2:47 pm
queentabbiecat99 GOLD, Dardanelle, Arkansas
15 articles 0 photos 48 comments

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Things aren't always what they seem.

thanks so much :D

on Feb. 26 2011 at 8:21 pm
Internal-Love PLATINUM, Queens, New York
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Nothing's black or white, its all just a shade of gray---

















TI "Live your Life" ft Rihanna

The words are strong and powerful, as is the message. And it really speaks out to people, directly. It sits them down and says "LISTEN IF YOU DONT DO THIS, THEN THIS IS GONNA HAPPEN" you really got that out just right.

But i wasn't feeling the poeticness of it (it doesnt mean this is a bad piece though i think it was well done. Maybe if you posted it in the what matters section of the site........)

i rated it too.



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