March 18, 2010
Words can't describe
All they do is get in the way
Of what I'm feelin' inside
Either way I'm gonna say

When my thoughts wander
The first place they go is to you
And when my heart skips a beat
I blame you, it's what I do

When I'm cryin' tears of sorrow
I wish you'd push them away
But you're cleanin' up hers
Now I'm drownin' in my pain

You swoop in and save me
Before i draw my last breath of air
You are my Lifeguard
A little late, but always there.

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Amanda13 said...
Jul. 10, 2010 at 11:32 am
i agree with kaileigh, love the last stanza best
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 1:15 pm
Thanks so much! :)
Kaileigh918 said...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 12:34 pm
this is really good! i like the last stanza most :)
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 2:13 pm
Thanks. I like the sort of twist at the end. THanks for you comment!!!
believer16 said...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 9:06 pm
i love this. and i love the message behind it too. wonderful job:) i just joined the website and my poems haven't yet been accepted but when they are i'd LOVE for you to check them out and see what you think:)
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 10:28 am
Thanks so much! I will definatley check out your work once it's posted!
mrsabbyjonas13 said...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 6:09 pm
This. Is. Amazing. I can't get over how much I love this! It's absolutely perfect. Your diction and word choice is beautiful and flows wonderfully. Keep up the awesome work, and please check out some of mine! (:
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 10:27 am
Thank you! I will definatley check out your work! isn't that how it works around here anyway??? haha
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 2, 2010 at 5:26 pm
Keep it up sis! Love your wording in everything you write, short and to the point but so compact and full of feeling. Love ya!
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
May 2, 2010 at 7:21 pm
--LoveHappens-- said...
Apr. 24, 2010 at 5:23 pm
I love the writing its intense and I like how I don't know what you are talking about until the last line and then everything comes together. The message is great please I would love it if you checked out my work too especially The Pretty One thanks
jazzy.g said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 6:29 pm
I like it yo<3! I miss yaa. Whos the Life Guard??
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 4:51 pm
i'll email it to ya!
Rain777 said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 9:25 pm
Im clearly your biggest fannn<3333333
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 7:44 pm
of course you are!!!!!!!!! and I am YOURS!!!!!!!!! buddies forever!!!!! yea yeah!!!!
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