March 19, 2010

moving on in life
requires leaving friends behind
this always brings the pain and tears
because friends like these are hard to find

the friends that are worth keeping
are the ones who truly care
the friends who stick right by your side
are needed more than air

sometimes when the distance stretches
the hearts move closer together
two people that didn't like each other
are now best friends forever

moving to a new town
means levying old friends in their place
its difficult to make new friends
to take the old one's space

making friends at an older age
is by far an easier task
because once a group of friends is found
the relationship will forever last

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Angelkiss415 said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 7:46 am
I agree with your poem totally. Making friends is hard. I can relate to this poem as everyone I met at school do nothing but avoid me like as if I am a disease. It would be easy to make friends with me as I am in the same situation
Shabanana replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 9:01 pm
Angelkiss415 replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 3:45 am
Your welcome I will check out more of your poems
babigerl1194 said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 8:03 pm
ehh, i disagree.
Shabanana replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 9:01 pm
you are always disagreeing but every person is different. these poems are person poems expressing my personal feelings. i went through the move and experianced all this through my eyes and this is what it was like for me. im sure if you were to have written this poem it would be different but because i am the poet i write it based on my personal feelings.
zayde jake said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 11:40 am
Great insights, well expressed !
Shabanana replied...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 2:54 pm
thanks. this is my creative writing peice for the yearbook. it could have been better but i had 2 write it in 1 hr and cum up w all the ideas during that time so it was very stressful. it was an in-class essay.
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