Who Am I?

March 19, 2010
By , Teaneck, NJ
Who Am I?

who am i?
i'm all alone
home each night
i cry and moan

people go to parties
hang out with their peers
i on the other hand
spend alone time with my tears

its hard to make friends
for people like me
the friends i had
were no more than three

now one friend has ditched me
the other one lied
the other yells at me
to sleep i cried

i just cannot take it
i feel it'd be best
if i had no friends
in my moms nest i would rest

the comfort of home
does best by me
the love of my family
cost not a fee

at times when i'm with my friends
i feel i want to die
i don't think i deserve this
but once again, who am i?

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Angelkiss415 said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 7:30 am
I can relate to this I have been feeling like that all my life at high school. I have no friends and now I have met someone like myself. I like you very much and I want to be your friend
Shabanana replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 7:22 pm
thank you and yes i have gone through this many times as i am a teenage girl and i am also having problems with friends. these problems were the insperation for this poem. please go check out the rest of my poems!! thanks, shana
Angelkiss415 replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 8:30 pm
Sure I will and I will give you feedback. I enjoy poetry and I hope to be a famous poet one day. I guess we all have dreams of that
babigerl1194 said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 7:57 pm
ohmagowd. this, is, amazing. everything i feel captured beautifully.
Shabanana replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 7:23 pm
thanks. please check out the rest of my poems! -shana
sfarias2010 said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 4:47 pm

this is good

bet many people can relate to it

Shabanana replied...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 7:26 pm
LiGht-ChaseR said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 11:28 am
Youch. This really you? Sounds to me like the emotions almost watered down. I bet you that many people will come across this poem and just let it out of their lives, but ouch, that burns. Maybe it's all for the better, because when the emotion is hidden, it's left to us to decide. I feel for you if this is true. And if it's not--your imagination is extrodinary. I've felt this before and, so, all of everyone else out there who feels the same--just know that you're not alone..... I really do feel ... (more »)
Shabanana replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 2:51 pm
thanks and no i don't really feel like this at all times just at certain times. i wrote this to show how all teens or even adults feel at times when they feel they are alone. like they don't deserve anything. hopefully this will help people overcome that feeling because they will learn that everyone has those feelings at times and life will get better. thanks for commenting -shana
starlight26:) replied...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 4:43 pm
You're right light chaser. Very good poem. But thx for writing it. I understand why u wrote it.
Shabanana replied...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 7:25 pm
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