Who Am I?

March 19, 2010
By Anonymous

Who Am I?

who am i?
i'm all alone
home each night
i cry and moan

people go to parties
hang out with their peers
i on the other hand
spend alone time with my tears

its hard to make friends
for people like me
the friends i had
were no more than three

now one friend has ditched me
the other one lied
the other yells at me
to sleep i cried

i just cannot take it
i feel it'd be best
if i had no friends
in my moms nest i would rest

the comfort of home
does best by me
the love of my family
cost not a fee

at times when i'm with my friends
i feel i want to die
i don't think i deserve this
but once again, who am i?


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on Apr. 6 2010 at 8:30 pm
Angelkiss415 SILVER, Dewsbury, Other
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Sure I will and I will give you feedback. I enjoy poetry and I hope to be a famous poet one day. I guess we all have dreams of that

on Apr. 6 2010 at 7:23 pm
Shabanana SILVER, Teaneck, New Jersey
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thanks. please check out the rest of my poems! -shana

on Apr. 6 2010 at 7:22 pm
Shabanana SILVER, Teaneck, New Jersey
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thank you and yes i have gone through this many times as i am a teenage girl and i am also having problems with friends. these problems were the insperation for this poem. please go check out the rest of my poems!! thanks, shana

on Apr. 5 2010 at 7:30 am
Angelkiss415 SILVER, Dewsbury, Other
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I can relate to this I have been feeling like that all my life at high school. I have no friends and now I have met someone like myself. I like you very much and I want to be your friend

on Apr. 4 2010 at 7:57 pm
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger

ohmagowd. this, is, amazing. everything i feel captured beautifully.

on Apr. 3 2010 at 7:26 pm
Shabanana SILVER, Teaneck, New Jersey
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thanks!!!!!!!

on Apr. 3 2010 at 7:25 pm
Shabanana SILVER, Teaneck, New Jersey
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thanks!!!!

sfarias2010 said...
on Apr. 2 2010 at 4:47 pm
sfarias2010, Columbus, Ohio
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this is good

bet many people can relate to it


on Apr. 2 2010 at 4:43 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you're not. It about being who you are and finding someone
who loves every bit of it."

"Life's tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late"

You're right light chaser. Very good poem. But thx for writing it. I understand why u wrote it.

on Apr. 1 2010 at 2:51 pm
Shabanana SILVER, Teaneck, New Jersey
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thanks and no i don't really feel like this at all times just at certain times. i wrote this to show how all teens or even adults feel at times when they feel they are alone. like they don't deserve anything. hopefully this will help people overcome that feeling because they will learn that everyone has those feelings at times and life will get better. thanks for commenting -shana

on Apr. 1 2010 at 11:28 am
LiGht-ChaseR GOLD, Out There, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"The Dark is generous, and it is patient, and it always wins, but in the heart of its strength lies weakness: One lone candle is enough to hold it back.
Love is more than a candle.
Love can ignite the stars." -Matthew Stover

Youch. This really you? Sounds to me like the emotions almost watered down. I bet you that many people will come across this poem and just let it out of their lives, but ouch, that burns. Maybe it's all for the better, because when the emotion is hidden, it's left to us to decide. I feel for you if this is true. And if it's not--your imagination is extrodinary. I've felt this before and, so, all of everyone else out there who feels the same--just know that you're not alone..... I really do feel for you guys.......... I suffer with you. <:) Good luck with life to all.


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