March 19, 2010
A single tear could break my soul, make crazy, let me loose control, yet they still try to fall, i build a wall to keep them in yet one sitll falls, traitor, once one falls they all follow, Traitors, the unseen reality of the truth, which is funny, because truth and reality are two differnt things, but still the unseen reality of the truth is your greatest fear, your loudest laugh, your deepest sob, your most quiet secret, your biggest flaws, and your littlest features, i think about all, as the tears fall, one by one

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kookymnstr said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 1:11 pm
Thank you :)
Angelkiss415 said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 7:21 am
I think you are a creative and imaginative writer and Your poem is the best I have seen by far
INnaturegirl said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 6:57 am
omg this is REALLY good!!!!!!!! i love it!!!! ur great keep writing :D
munkyman95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 6:56 am

really good, I liked the ideas behind the poem, but one thing, try structuring your poem so that the reader knows how the poem is intended to be read


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