Truth

March 19, 2010
By kookymnstr PLATINUM, Crowder, Oklahoma
kookymnstr PLATINUM, Crowder, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
" One good thing about music, When it hits you, You feel no pain."- Bob Marley


A single tear could break my soul, make crazy, let me loose control, yet they still try to fall, i build a wall to keep them in yet one sitll falls, traitor, once one falls they all follow, Traitors, the unseen reality of the truth, which is funny, because truth and reality are two differnt things, but still the unseen reality of the truth is your greatest fear, your loudest laugh, your deepest sob, your most quiet secret, your biggest flaws, and your littlest features, i think about all, as the tears fall, one by one



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on Apr. 6 2010 at 1:11 pm
kookymnstr PLATINUM, Crowder, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
" One good thing about music, When it hits you, You feel no pain."- Bob Marley

Thank you :)

on Apr. 5 2010 at 7:21 am
Angelkiss415 SILVER, Dewsbury, Other
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I think you are a creative and imaginative writer and Your poem is the best I have seen by far

INnaturegirl said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 6:57 am
omg this is REALLY good!!!!!!!! i love it!!!! ur great keep writing :D

on Apr. 1 2010 at 6:56 am
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I will become, what I know I am' Michael Jordan

really good, I liked the ideas behind the poem, but one thing, try structuring your poem so that the reader knows how the poem is intended to be read

 





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