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I Need You to Hold Me

Your head on my shoulder was a high like no other. I keep thinking of you, my mind weary with lust. I just cannot believe that there is no "us". I wanted to be the one to make you smile. Why couldn't you stay around for a while. I promised you I'd never leave but where did you go when i was in need. You were and still are my only. Please, i need you to hold me. I meant it when i said it, my love was pure and true, KCR, I love you





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amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse said...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 9:59 pm
it's still a great poem
 
hxcRocker said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 3:07 am
the website filtered out her name so the rythm isn't as good as it was
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 9:23 pm
it's beautiful  you should write more poems driven by your love  it helps to talk about it or to write about it... helped me alot with Kim and Megan... and i hope it'll help me when Ashley goes...  but it does help   and you should write more poems like this one
 
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