I Need You to Hold Me

March 9, 2010
By hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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Your head on my shoulder was a high like no other. I keep thinking of you, my mind weary with lust. I just cannot believe that there is no "us". I wanted to be the one to make you smile. Why couldn't you stay around for a while. I promised you I'd never leave but where did you go when i was in need. You were and still are my only. Please, i need you to hold me. I meant it when i said it, my love was pure and true, KCR, I love you


The author's comments:
I had to change her name a little bit too protect her identity. Her real name sends shivers down my spine. I know she doesn't care about me and it hurts. I just wish she was here to hold me when i cried

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on Mar. 31 2010 at 9:59 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

it's still a great poem

on Mar. 30 2010 at 3:07 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
59 articles 2 photos 88 comments
the website filtered out her name so the rythm isn't as good as it was

on Mar. 29 2010 at 9:23 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

it's beautiful  you should write more poems driven by your love  it helps to talk about it or to write about it... helped me alot with Kim and Megan... and i hope it'll help me when Ashley goes...  but it does help   and you should write more poems like this one




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