Don't Die a Needless Death

March 12, 2010
By Jenna4Jesus BRONZE, New Brunswick, North Carolina
Jenna4Jesus BRONZE, New Brunswick, North Carolina
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Don’t die a needless death,
as so many have before.
Don’t die a needless death
another body buried beneath the floor.
Don’t die a needless death,
when redemption’s at the door.
Don’t die a needless death,
when there’s purpose and much more.

Don’t die a needless death,
when One has come to save you.
Don’t die a needless death
when yet there’s One who loves you,
Don’t die a needless death;
Once more shall I repeat it,
Don’t die a needless death
For your life, Christ can redeem it.

The author's comments:
"Needless" meaning don't die pointlessly because you don't have to.

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torya1107 said...
on Mar. 13 2011 at 11:24 pm
torya1107, Chg, South Carolina
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I know lots of people hate repetition, but in this poem I think it works very nicely. I can't find a thing to change. :)

on May. 1 2010 at 2:25 pm
Star_In_The_Sky BRONZE, Isabela, Other
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I like this so much!  It's very true!!  Christ is awesome.

on Apr. 29 2010 at 5:42 am
Jenna4Jesus BRONZE, New Brunswick, North Carolina
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Thanx a ton! :)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 8:03 pm
Jenna4Jesus BRONZE, New Brunswick, North Carolina
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Aw, thank you so much! You've just made my day; I really appreciate it a ton. :)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 6:06 pm
PurpleFeather BRONZE, Canton, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"The pen is mightier than the sword." - Edward Bulwer-Lytton

Love it! So simple yet so beautiful. Keep writing for Christ!

on Apr. 21 2010 at 8:27 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

i completely definitely love this!!!! this is beautiful

on Apr. 1 2010 at 10:37 pm
Jenna4Jesus BRONZE, New Brunswick, North Carolina
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Thanks! :) I'll definately check out your work!

Milo! said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 8:44 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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