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Don’t die a needless death,
as so many have before.
Don’t die a needless death
another body buried beneath the floor.
Don’t die a needless death,
when redemption’s at the door.
Don’t die a needless death,
when there’s purpose and much more.

Don’t die a needless death,
when One has come to save you.
Don’t die a needless death
when yet there’s One who loves you,
Don’t die a needless death;
Once more shall I repeat it,
Don’t die a needless death
For your life, Christ can redeem it.



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torya1107 said...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 11:24 pm:
I know lots of people hate repetition, but in this poem I think it works very nicely. I can't find a thing to change. :)
 
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Star_In_The_Sky said...
May 1, 2010 at 2:25 pm:
I like this so much!  It's very true!!  Christ is awesome.
 
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PurpleFeatherThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 6:06 pm:
Love it! So simple yet so beautiful. Keep writing for Christ!
 
Jose4Jesus replied...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 5:42 am :
Thanx a ton! :)
 
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jonas_chic899 said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 8:27 am:
i completely definitely love this!!!! this is beautiful
 
Jose4Jesus replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 8:03 pm :
Aw, thank you so much! You've just made my day; I really appreciate it a ton. :)
 
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Milo! said...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 8:44 pm:
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
Jose4Jesus replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 10:37 pm :
Thanks! :) I'll definately check out your work!
 
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