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do you care for me

do you care for me
i've got to know
tell me please.
am i worth your time?
when i smile at you
is it a crime?
do you care for me?
tell me please
be my eyes
help me see.
please tell me
do you care for me.
when we kissed
i couldn't breath
but when you said thanks
i felt relieved
tell me please
do you care for me.
i have to know
so i can go on
with my life
and if you don't,
i need to deal with
the strife.
so tell me please
do you care for me.

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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 6:28 am:

I like it but maybe it could have been improved without the rhyme scheme. Good context, though, and I like the basis of it a lot. Keep writitng!

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