dream of tomorrow

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She sits in her mind storm in her head
continplating on the things that were said
they say she's not good enough words float out in a stream
They say she's not good enough to acomplish her dream
She sits and she thinks of her dream of tomorrow
Her dream floats away in an ocean of sorrow
Inside her mind she knows she can do it but words hurt a lot
She writes her words down on paper the only thing she's got
She sits and says to herself do they really know me how do they know if ill acomplish my dreams
She reads aloud her work the words out they hurled
she's acomplishing her dream in front of all of the world
BY MORGAN BROOKE HILL AGE13





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anomalei said...
Feb. 8, 2009 at 3:39 pm
i read your other poem on here -and i have some advice for you.
try writing a poem that doesn't rhyme. or something different, in general. it'll help - it expands your horizons, and challenges your talents.
 
DaretoDream said...
Dec. 6, 2008 at 6:01 pm
I love this. Your work has to be some of the best on here. Congratulations. This is amazing.
 
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