A Cheshires Grin [And an attempt to Rhyme.]

March 2, 2010
By Straye GOLD, A Place, Other
Straye GOLD, A Place, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"There are as many wrong reasons to do the right thing as there are stars in the sky, but never is there a right reason that justifies doing the wrong thing."


Can a pain so strong be pierced by light,
Will the dark ever end in empty night?
Surrounded by trees, shadows close in,
Sinister evil and a cheshire's grin.
Alone I have walked the ground of this place,
Then along came you, My saving Grace.

When I was lost you came without call,
When I was hurt you soothed without question,
When I was alone you took me in without Plea,
In the falling rain that was my bleeding heart,
pain became pleasure and sorrow became Joy

Can a soul that sits so still in the storm,
ever take on a more pleasant form,
Surrounded by light and falling rain,
the soul still drowns in tormented pain,
But the sun will shine and clouds will part,
and my world will become a form of art.

When I was lost you came without call,
When I was hurt you soothed without question,
When I was alone you took me in without Plea,
In the falling rain that was my bleeding heart,
pain became pleasure and sorrow became Joy

Can a day so bright ever end?
When the light is God's way to defend
A broken heart that cried tears of blood
when in the end, he stemmed the flood,
an angel came and saved this life,
from living within Poisoned strife.


The author's comments:
I can't put rhyme and rhythm together. It doesn't work.

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Straye GOLD said...
on Jun. 8 2010 at 4:11 pm
Straye GOLD, A Place, Other
17 articles 4 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There are as many wrong reasons to do the right thing as there are stars in the sky, but never is there a right reason that justifies doing the wrong thing."

Rewritten and Edited!!!

 

Can a pain so strong be pierced by light, Will the dark ever end in empty night?Surrounded by trees, shadows close in, Sinister evil and a cheshire's grin. Alone I have walked the ground of this place,Then along came you, My saving Grace.
When I was lost you came without call,When I was hurt you soothed without question,When I was alone you took me in without Plea,In the falling rain that was my bleeding heart,pain became pleasure, sorrow torn apart.
Can a soul that sits so still in the storm,ever take on a more pleasant form,Surrounded by light and falling rain,the soul still drowns in tormented pain,But the sun will shine and clouds will part,and my world will become a form of art.
When I was lost you came without call,When I was hurt you soothed without question,When I was alone you took me in without Plea,In the falling rain that was my bleeding heart,pain became pleasure, sorrow torn apart.
Can a day so bright ever come to an end?When the light is God's way to defendA broken heart that cried tears of bloodwhen in the end, he stemmed the flood,an angel came and saved this life,no longer wounded by shadow's knife.



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