A bit of everything and a bit of you

March 1, 2010
By EnglishGirl BRONZE, Sopot, Other
EnglishGirl BRONZE, Sopot, Other
4 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will tell you,as I have told many of them,right man will come in the end", Jane Austen, "Life is your party, so enjoy!", "It's worse doing nothing, than doing bad thing", "Life is the thing that happens to you while you're planning something else"


I have seen the colour of clouds
sparkling in your ey
I have seen birds' fly
and rainbow in the sky

I have read many books
but never resolved what's written in your soul
all this nonsense is a movie directed by life
we just have the main roles

We're starring there, keep my hand forever
Stay away! Come here!
What should I do with you my dear?
To tell you to keep off?
Or to stand by?
Are you made to read what's on my mind?

I have tasted... Have I really?
'Cause it seems to me so silly!
Felt the wind in my hair
Felt the beats of my heart
When once broken never repaired
It's too difficult for a new start

I have smelt and I have touched
I haven't known about that much
It was just a wrong step
Kissed you, touched you, grabbed and wrapped
Hot and tall, handsome guy
I was curious to try
I had a prediction, your pride was huge
there is no one we should judge

I have been, you see, there's written my name
But for you it was just a game
Nothing was on our side
We just had a quite well ride
The controller was in you hand
You were taking us right to death

In our memories we are inscribed
this is not just a stupid rhyme
it's time for you to log out
"But, darling, I didn't mean..."
Get out or I'll shout and scream!

You opened my heart and went
the keys haven't been moved since you left
I can see you through the window
Once again I feel like a widow
I'm wiping a tear
Everything is clear
You're packing things in the lorry
It's time for writing some new story



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on Jul. 13 2010 at 4:02 pm
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger

I really, liked this and the metaphor. It's great. I had the same idea about life being a movie and everyone in it I hired. Great minds think alike. lol. Oh and I loved the rhyme and your vocabulary use. Though in one or two places the words didn't quite flow as easy as they should but that's o.k nobody's perfect. <3 Loved it. p/s plz review my work??

on Jul. 12 2010 at 5:29 am
EnglishGirl BRONZE, Sopot, Other
4 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will tell you,as I have told many of them,right man will come in the end", Jane Austen, "Life is your party, so enjoy!", "It's worse doing nothing, than doing bad thing", "Life is the thing that happens to you while you're planning something else"

Thanx! :) I submitted a short story, but I'm still waiting on it to be published....

on Jul. 11 2010 at 7:54 pm
sunnyhunny PLATINUM, Litchfield, New Hampshire
22 articles 3 photos 329 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind."
-Ghandi

I really like this.  It sounds like real, professional poetry.  There are a couple places where it didn't flow perfect and I think you just needed it to rhyme, but this is seriously really, really, good.  Keep writing.  Just let me know when you write something else and I'll read it!

on Jul. 9 2010 at 12:58 pm
EnglishGirl BRONZE, Sopot, Other
4 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will tell you,as I have told many of them,right man will come in the end", Jane Austen, "Life is your party, so enjoy!", "It's worse doing nothing, than doing bad thing", "Life is the thing that happens to you while you're planning something else"

Thanx! :) Well, read my review while my short story becomes viewable (I submitted it yesterday, so it will be in a couple of weeks viewable ;))

on Jul. 9 2010 at 8:23 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

dude that was like deep and true poetry!!this was soo frickn good, u worded this outstandingly!!!! awesome job! keep writing :)


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