Angel

May 8, 2008
By Marie Nelson, Palmer, TX

Angel

Angel with wings so fair,
Angel with a heart that cares,
Will you please help my friend?
I think his life is about to end.
Please carry him from Death's cold hands,
And take him to the Promised Land,
Where his soul can fly free,
With fair angels just like thee.


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on Aug. 7 2009 at 6:37 pm
carolinesell PLATINUM, Cedar Falls, Iowa
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i really like the poem. it has a lot of heart in it.

:) the rhymes are really good but it also helps to consider timing when you use rhymes.

keep writing poetry!!! :)


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