May 8, 2008

Angel with wings so fair,
Angel with a heart that cares,
Will you please help my friend?
I think his life is about to end.
Please carry him from Death's cold hands,
And take him to the Promised Land,
Where his soul can fly free,
With fair angels just like thee.

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carolines This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 7, 2009 at 6:37 pm
i really like the poem. it has a lot of heart in it.
:) the rhymes are really good but it also helps to consider timing when you use rhymes.
keep writing poetry!!! :)
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