A Beautiful Sunse

May 8, 2008
A Beautiful Sunset

I love to go the park at sunset
The clouds are beautiful
I love to look at the sky
And think about nothing
I love to smell the flowers
And I love watching the kids

I love riding to the park and seeing the flowers
Their petals the color of a sunset
They are so beautiful
I pass the kids
Who care about nothing
Their eyes mesmerized on the sky

I love sitting staring at nothing
The playground full of kids
Their eyes the color of the sky
I love watching the sunset
The colors of a flower
It is so beautiful

I love hearing the flowers
In the wind when there are no screaming kids
Even though their screams are beautiful
I love tasting the sunset
And watching the sky
With an intensity describable by nothing

I love riding home to nothing
Right after the sunset
And looking at the blank sky
The stars like little flowers
No kids
It’s still beautiful

I love the feeling of a beautiful nothing
There is no sky and there are no kids
The sunset is like a flower

Jess Trygier

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writingrox2 said...
Dec. 26, 2010 at 4:36 pm
Pretty good and deep. Love the idea of a sunset poem :)
VennemeyerVolleyball99 said...
Oct. 18, 2008 at 9:06 pm
Wow, this brings back memories. Your sestina is very nice, Jess. I like your use of "mesmerized" in the last line of the second stanza. (O-M-G! W-H-A-T?)
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