Outside

Open ur eyes
the sun up, its really bright
the wind is so loud, it cries
but the words it say are right

the loudness blowing through ur ears
the sunlight blinding u
but the wind blows away ur fear
and the blindness gives u somethin to do

smellin the best fresh air
feelin the healthy plants on the ground
theres no rules for u to care
theres nothin lost, everythin is found

theres no fear in or on this earth
theres no right or wrong
theres no luck no curse
theres just a beautiful song





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Bobbi said...
Jun. 3, 2010 at 8:12 pm
This is beautifully done, the last stanza is my favorite. AMAZING
 
Kumanga replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 2:51 am
lol yeah this is the first different poem i made, lol
 
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