Take a close look and what do you see???? something that has no Answer to it yet!

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Take a close look and what do you see???? something that has no Answer to it yet!

look at me,
look at my life,
who am i to become,
the one Question,
I pondered for days,
In and out it goes that Question,
When i look in the mirror is it me i see,
or is it someone wanting out,
The Question has no Answer,
For the Answer lies far ahead,
WE must go through life with thing that are not yet answered
We must learn are own feelings,
Become Are OWN PERSON,
For we have but only a taste of the world,
and what the world can for hold for us,
We only see what Poeple wont Us To See,
We dont always make are own diecisons on things,
they seem to be made for us every step we take,
is it me taking that step or is it you thats taking it for me ??
Can You Figuer that out ???
Or will you need Help With It?





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Cory M. said...
Mar. 16, 2009 at 5:09 pm
Good concept. Capitalize "I" and the beingining of new sentences. Having multiple question marks at the end of your sentences shows your enthusiastic, but I couldn't remain serious throught the piece due to that and one other thing: your title. Why? Refer back to what I said previously.

"Become Are OWN PERSON," > Become our own person

Other than those previously mentioned it was well composed.
 
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