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How doth the weeping willow grow?
Leafed branches drip like rain;
Its seeds, the weary limbs do sow
And make the water plain.

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Megan Rock



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Kiana_M said...
Aug. 14, 2009 at 5:53 pm
It's really good,
your word choice is very old-fashioned and wonderful,
it's a very lovely poem :) Good job.

- Kiana (Rate my latest poem, please? :D)
 
Mushroom:) said...
Aug. 9, 2009 at 9:47 pm
Great poem! I love the description in this poem, it is beautiful! The willow tree is also my favourite tree,which makes me love the poem even more!!
 
bakinboy1 said...
May 5, 2009 at 12:09 am
would love to see more!!!!
 
Rhea D. Ravenfinger said...
May 2, 2009 at 9:25 pm
You could lengthen the poem because the effect the poem could have, it doesn't have at the moment. To me the poem isn't done yet.
 
Megatron said...
Apr. 9, 2009 at 2:59 am
Wow, I really like the style that is in. Too bad it's so short!
 
Cat said...
Jan. 21, 2009 at 10:18 pm
This is incredible.
 
Tess said...
Oct. 19, 2008 at 4:26 pm
Nice imagry, liked your olden day speech, too, it has a nice touch. Some people with no poetic background might find the olden day speech confusing, so I'd try to add some rhyming in.
 
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