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How doth the weeping willow grow?
Leafed branches drip like rain;
Its seeds, the weary limbs do sow
And make the water plain.

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Megan Rock



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Kiana_M said...
Aug. 14, 2009 at 5:53 pm:
It's really good,
your word choice is very old-fashioned and wonderful,
it's a very lovely poem :) Good job.

- Kiana (Rate my latest poem, please? :D)
 
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Mushroom:) said...
Aug. 9, 2009 at 9:47 pm:
Great poem! I love the description in this poem, it is beautiful! The willow tree is also my favourite tree,which makes me love the poem even more!!
 
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bakinboy1 said...
May 5, 2009 at 12:09 am:
would love to see more!!!!
 
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Rhea D. Ravenfinger said...
May 2, 2009 at 9:25 pm:
You could lengthen the poem because the effect the poem could have, it doesn't have at the moment. To me the poem isn't done yet.
 
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Megatron said...
Apr. 9, 2009 at 2:59 am:
Wow, I really like the style that is in. Too bad it's so short!
 
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Cat said...
Jan. 21, 2009 at 10:18 pm:
This is incredible.
 
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Tess said...
Oct. 19, 2008 at 4:26 pm:
Nice imagry, liked your olden day speech, too, it has a nice touch. Some people with no poetic background might find the olden day speech confusing, so I'd try to add some rhyming in.
 
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