My Love for You

February 23, 2010
From the day we met till the day I die
I will fear that this is all a dream, a lie
The way you smiled at me that hot summer day
All my tears and pain went away
The day before you was full of dread and sorrow
That day, I didn’t know about tomorrow
You’re my star, you’re my light
I never knew anyone could shine so bright
You’re like a mountain, so tall and strong
I feel my heart is where you belong
You showed me, that love never dies
To me, you’re the heavens and skies
If I could prove it to you, I would
But no actions or words ever could
Sometimes I fear this is just lust
If it is, all I ask is for your friendship and trust
If I am not the one, she better know she has luck
And any girl who breaks your heart is scum and muck
I will always be by your side
Even if I’ll never be your bride
I want you to know, I’d take any risk or chance
To be in your arms, and for your romance
If you were in any danger, I want you to know
That I would die for you, and be your hero
You ask God, for all I ever pray, think or do
Has something to do with My Love for You.

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Curiosity said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 10:39 am
 This is a really romantic piece. I really like the way you wrote it. Definitely keep up the good work!
MyFairyTaleEnding replied...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 5:45 pm
I will thank you sooooo much!! I'm glad so many people like it! I'll check out your work as well. :)
CharlotteC said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 9:15 pm
MyFairyTaleEnding replied...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 5:45 pm
Thank you so much!! :) I'll be sure to check out your work too! :D
Yvaine_96 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 8:11 am
hmmmmmmmm romantic!!! remember to check my posts as well. I'll alert u on dis page....
MyFairyTaleEnding replied...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 7:21 pm
I most definatly will! :) THANK YOU!
elfiewrites said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 8:11 pm
This is so touching, and beautifully written! Also, thank you so much for the post on my story "Try to Remember." I really appreciated it (: I hope this gets into the magazine.. you deserve it
MyFairyTaleEnding replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 2:18 pm

You are totally WELCOME!! Thank youu soooooo much!!! You don't know how much this means to me! I sure hope it does!! Your story was so good, I HOPE it gets put into the magazine! :D

Thank youuuuuu!!!! :)

Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 11:06 am
this is really touching and amazing. i'm glad you can put how strongly you feel onto paper and make it realistic. great job and check out my work too:-)
MyFairyTaleEnding replied...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 5:23 pm
Oh my gosh! Thank you so much! :D I'm so glad I accomplished the whole feeling and emotion into writing. It too k me a LONG time to do that! I will check out your work as soon as I can! :DD
PoetLaureate07 said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 10:03 am
This is amazing... you are such a great writer.... You do your best it seems to capture the reader into the poem to story... Keep Writing.... this is lovely, and so is your other peice........ I am intrigued that anyone can write something this amazing!!!
MyFairyTaleEnding replied...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 8:20 pm
Oh my gosh!!!! THANK YOUU!!! I love you for saying this! I didn't think I was that great of a writer...thank you! You just made my day! :D I will definatly check out you're work!
PoetLaureate07 replied...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 8:55 pm
Thanks, but I wouldn't say anything that wasn't true!!! Keep Writing, and you done a wonderful job of pulling me into the poem.... I normally get side tracked and have to read it over..... I didn't get side tracked once!!!! XD
MyFairyTaleEnding replied...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 9:49 pm
Ahh! THANK YOU! (I say that a lot) Wow, that is sooo GREAT!! I'm glad I could pull you in like that! I'm THRILLED! When I read your commets I screamed actually...but that's me. XD
PoetLaureate07 replied...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 8:59 pm
Sounds like me, Hon... =)) I'd prolly scream too.... and i do just a little bit.... XD
MyFairyTaleEnding replied...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 9:13 pm
Haha! Niiiice. I couldn't help it! I felt sooo HAPPY. My dad was like, "What are you screaming about?!" XD
Seriously, I haven't stopped smiling since! :D
PoetLaureate07 replied...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 10:02 pm
haha... girl, you've got talent... dont be ashamed to show it!!! =)
MyFairyTaleEnding replied...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 5:34 pm
Oh my gosh THANK YOUU! You obviously have some too! :) Thank you sooo MUCH!
PoetLaureate07 replied...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 10:03 pm
You're welcome to the maximum... if there is any.. and thanks soooo much on the comment.. =)
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