February 21, 2010
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People think they are fat
When they sit down things go splat
But really there is so much more
When two males see each other there’s a war
Mothers on the other hand are caring
Come close and you’ll be daring
They have humongous tusks across their face
And walk with a certain grace
Elephants have very big ears
When you make fun of them, their eyes fill with tears
They live together in a heard
To them living alone is just absurd
They sway from side to side
And have a very callous hide
And as you can see, there is a lot to say
About the big and gray elephants of today

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purplegurl523 said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 3:29 pm
I didn't notice it either, I was distracted by all of the good things in the poem to notice!
purplegurl523 said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 8:18 pm
brilliant rhymes! My friend loves elephants too, I'm going to show her this!
ElephantGirl523 replied...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 9:19 pm
Here's the friend! Simply brilliant, I love the appreciation of this too often overlooked animal. Especially the first part. . . splendid! I love it!
Rainey replied...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 8:06 pm
thank you! but i did mispell herd....haha. My friend actually pointed it out to me...but i dont want other people to make fun of me like she and my dad are
ElephantGirl523 replied...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 1:55 pm
Still, i think it's an awesome poem. I didn't even notice the misspelling!
Rainey replied...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 3:08 pm
neither did i, but my overly obsessive perfectionest friend had to point it out...lol...
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