I cry and cry for help

October 13, 2007
By Erin Murray, Wicklow, Ireland

I cry and cry for help
But nobody hears my call
I slowly drown in my own sadness
And there is no saviour in sight
I can’t tell whether I should go or not
I’ll soon be gone anyway
I am slowly disappearing
But nobody seems to notice
My head is giving me life or death
But I can’t choose
It doesn’t matter
Either way I lose


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on Aug. 9 2009 at 9:40 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

This makes so much sense. I have definitely felt this way before, which makes it so understandable! It is also really written well and it made me feel sad when I read it. Great poem!

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on Jun. 17 2009 at 6:58 pm
PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then watch everyone wonder how you did it!

many teens must feel that way too... including moi


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