the last thing you'll ever hear me say,

February 21, 2010
is that i love you.

and i know i left you;
i knew what i was doing;
but i couldn't stop myself;
you understand don't you?

you always understand;
without me even having to explain.

but this time, i need to.
''rebecca, you're losing the most important thing in your life.''

all because of what?
something that left a long time ago.
that's not coming back.

why did you take it away?
because i need you, not that.
i'm so sorry God.
please don't let me do this again.
i don't want to; and you know that.

but can you bring it back?
i'd be so happy if you did.
please, give it back to me?
i need it.
no, you know i don't need it.
but i really want it.
and you know i want it.





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Radical_Rebecca said...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 8:57 pm
You gave a good general idea about what you wanted.  Readers have to go in depth to understand what you're trying to convey which shows the true aspects of your speaker.  For some, it might even take a second look at it to grasp your desire.  It sounds like a true thought process! Good job!
 
rebotyler44 replied...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 3:41 pm
thanks so much!
 
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