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February 21, 2010
By Avenging_Angel PLATINUM, Cleburne, Texas
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"You never really know your friends from your enemies until the ice breaks. "- Eskimo

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I try to hide
the fact
that I can't fight back
to show
I'm not afraid
I truly could have
ever trusted
to have slip away
towards their own destrution
slow and painfully
tearing their mind apart
I watch in horror
not able to take my eyes away
It just keeps
tearing through my mind
how much
I want to help
but in the end
their mind thinks
I'm the enemy
that is the pain and torture
i am going through.......

The author's comments:
this was actually made when some one was angery at me or at some one else that i loved, they ended up turning there anger out on me and the people that are around me and this is basically the only way i can express it. and i really dont have the guts to stand up to the person so i just wrote down what i was feeling but that really doesnt make me feel any better because their still blinde to their actions and words.
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Avenging_Angel PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 24 2010 at 5:29 pm
Avenging_Angel PLATINUM, Cleburne, Texas
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"You never really know your friends from your enemies until the ice breaks. "- Eskimo

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me either, it's great meeting different people and all but i dont think i would actually like to watch anyone i care about go through this it's just so hard not to speak out whats on my mind you know.
Milo! said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 3:02 pm
I actually don't. But I don't mind talking this way.
Avenging_Angel PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 10:14 pm
Avenging_Angel PLATINUM, Cleburne, Texas
33 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You never really know your friends from your enemies until the ice breaks. "- Eskimo

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your right and there is only so much a person can take right.by the way you have a facebook or some type of social internet deal so we can become friends and talk.
Milo! said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 8:55 pm
Yeah. It's hard to bring up things people don't want to hear, but this poem is a great first step.
Avenging_Angel PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 7:24 pm
Avenging_Angel PLATINUM, Cleburne, Texas
33 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You never really know your friends from your enemies until the ice breaks. "- Eskimo

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the real reason behind the poem was what i typed and also my mom had been getting mad a lot blamming my step brother but i am to afraid to mention that she always assumes things so i kinda just dont want to get in trouble for something that is true.
Milo! said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 4:09 pm
Wow. I actually have the same problem. Your poem is great, and I truly love it.