I'll Blow Your House Down

February 5, 2010
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He approaches me.
His jaws gaping and his serrated teeth gleaming.
Steam billows from the pot and I pull off the lid.
He slinks down the chimney and prepares, to execute a masterful jump.
He vanishes into the pot.

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zman1 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 11:26 am
Who rated my poem three stars? I don't mind but is there anything I could improve. I appreciate feedback.
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