You're everything!

February 6, 2010
By Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."


I been walking to long down this path
and truely it seems endless
No shortcuts are there to take, I cant do the math
Im looking for whom i might be needing the most
I cant find the exit,, im lost
I see shadows, its not you its your ghost
IF you are here .. please stay
I want you to be with me night and day
Together we can find the way
You told me all you know to me you ganna teach
In my mind while you talk, I picture us together on the beach
Your words to me are a holy speech
Dont look at me by my age
In life its just a page
I listen to you when you talk, watch me while I dance on the stage
Ill clam your rage, Ill lock all your anger in a cage..
In your eyes, I might seem young
My heart doesnt beat, its calls your name, it just rung!
Dont say I cant love.. be a fair judge
Did I add to your life taste? I put on some fudge
On my cheeck there lays a tear
It desolves as soon as your voice I hear
This will come to an end
But let our hearts remain straight, dont let yours bend
And one day we both will be "gone with the wind"
Letters and notes no longer Ill send
Ill look at your eyes, Deeper, so dont blink
Let me of you forever think
This feeling to you isnt so new
You've had it, not once but a few
Dont let me be your gum, when it lose its flavor you no longer chew
In life, Hapiness is all we would wanna taste
And there isnt time to waste!
Lets forget all we have faced
Imagine that its only the two of us on earth!
Today starts our journey.. It's its birth!


The author's comments:
This poem,is one of my favorites.. I like how most of it rhyme! I hope people see the meaning of it .. its more than just words!

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BurnHem said...
on Nov. 26 2010 at 11:54 am
And I am not surprised!! Again, I just finished reading this poem all over again and I realized that it's honestly just great cant find better words!

Shahed GOLD said...
on Nov. 23 2010 at 4:38 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

I really appricate that.. Yes, actually I take a creative writing class I have a 100 ..  :)

BurnHem said...
on Nov. 22 2010 at 4:28 pm
You know what I enjoyed the most(?) That this poem is long enough to help me ilstruate a picture and see the meaning of it! It's beyond good! Do you take any classes to help you in writing? Like advanced english class if you're in school? If you dont, then you should because its very clear that you have a gift!

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jun. 24 2010 at 12:01 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

your welcome

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 24 2010 at 11:55 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Yea sometimes the rhyming isnt that good in some poems.. But I try :)

Thank you!!


_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jun. 23 2010 at 5:19 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

Beautiful, and the ryhming actually flows together rather then some awkward poems.

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 20 2010 at 7:48 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Aww thank you! Dont thank me for reading them .. they were awesome you have no idea how I really enjoyed each and everyone of them .. and Im so glad you like it :))

on Jun. 20 2010 at 1:47 pm
Comfortably_Numb DIAMOND, Orchard Park, New York
55 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fairy tales do not teach children that dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children that dragons can be killed.

this poem is my favoriteee (so far xp) i love all the comparisons you make and the way you phrase things. it's so beautiful and really conveys the feelings you have on the subject your writing about. and thank you sooooo much for reading all my poems :) all your comments made me feel soooo good about myself and just made my day. once again, thank you soo much!! keep writingg!! :D

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 12:54 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Aww thanks! Since you dont have an account I wonder how you heard about my poems? , again, thanks for stopping by :)

Shadows said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 8:53 am
The meaning is clear. I said it two times and ill say it again... You have talent and thats what brings me in!

Shahed GOLD said...
on May. 25 2010 at 3:44 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

You know there are very few comments that show how people understood this poem, thank you so much for commenting!

on May. 25 2010 at 2:24 pm
Joseph123 PLATINUM, Paris, Other
26 articles 0 photos 6 comments
I really like how the poem starts with the walking down the path, how you incorporate your feelings with someone else, and then end the poem with, "Today starts our journey...It's its birth," because it's reviving. 

on Mar. 8 2010 at 7:46 am
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

Your so welcome. :)

Shahed GOLD said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 4:55 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Im ganna love it when you publish it.. thank you for reading and commenting :) so much!

on Mar. 3 2010 at 9:12 am
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

It kinda reminds me of a poem that I have. I love lines 12, 14a, 16. They remind me of my poem called understand me. I haven't posted it yet.

Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 8:48 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

aww.. thanks!!

on Feb. 27 2010 at 1:04 am
h3arts4ever BRONZE, Beaverton, Oregon
2 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Forget falling in love... I'd rather fall into chocolate!"

that's adorable! it's truely is the sweeetest poem ever!

Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 5:46 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

thnxx ... ;)

Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 5:45 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

thank you mon ;) im glad u liked it

MONICA said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 5:36 pm
Aww dats the sweetest poem i have ever heard!

keep it up shahed ;)


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