Forever Silenced

February 5, 2010
By Bowielover BRONZE, Perryville, Missouri
Bowielover BRONZE, Perryville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, if you miss, you'll land among the stars.

All this pain locked up inside
Life, a crazy ride
The rhyme flows
as the intensity grows.
The cut goes in deep
as my heart begins to weep.
No one knows the pain I feel.
I just want to let go of the wheel.

Then I would no longer have to worry
because death would come in a hurry.
The darkness closes in around me,
As though I am lost at sea.
I let out one last cry
as I drift towards the sky.
I see my body laying there.
No one seems to give a care.

Suicide seems like the way to go,
by gun, drugs, blades, or bow.
I climb up the mountain,
blood flows like a fountain.
I kneel down and say,
"Lord, please take this pain away"
Death surrounds me, making haste
My life is such a waste.

The author's comments:
This isn't an intention, it is merely something that keeps me from this fate.

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This article has 2 comments.

lindy said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 8:50 pm
Awesome poem!!! It is hard years of your life, hang in there. It will get better. Once out of high school you are the driver of your life. Take control and drive somewhere good!!

on Feb. 16 2010 at 1:24 pm
hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
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Favorite Quote:
poetry is a diary written out loud

wow this is deep. i know exactly how you feel. i used to cutt nobody even cared. ive written poems on my feelings about that to. you should check out my work


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