Say Good-Bye

January 28, 2010
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when you look around...What do you see?
Kids running in the streets?
But are they playing?
Do you see people?
Yes but they're not calm
They're running for their lives
Weilding guns
You has begon...Everything is ending...
The worlds in kayos. Poeple are running for their lives

Theirs an epic battle taking place
One we cant win
A fight that who ever is done for

Look around and say good-bye
Because the time has come...
Enless you stand and fight...b ut will you?
That choice is up to you

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mskullgirl said...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 4:12 pm
Really good. It sort of reminds me of the holocaust
qui133 said...
Aug. 31, 2010 at 12:21 pm
wow. i've read several of yur peices now and i love all of them! this was awsome!
darkangel09 replied...
Aug. 31, 2010 at 8:53 pm
thanks. i'm glad you like them
sleeplessdreamer said...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 9:06 pm

This is a very well constructed poem. I especially loved the beginning. It took my breath away quite literally. The only thing I would say is there are some spelling errors that are kind of blatant, but other than that, your poem is fabulous. You definitely have talent. 

Check out my work if you ever get the chance. I would really appreciate it. :)

darkangel09 replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 11:07 pm

Thanks. Yea, i'm working on the spelling thing...kind of faild it in school

I am defiantly going too

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