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Forming a crossroad
Between the living
And the dead

Down this river
To the world of evil
Darkness appears
Ravens flying near

The reaper comes fourth
And take souls from the north
Putting them in pain
Making them go insane

Feasting upon there souls
Making there hearts, turn to coal
This is where the dead roam
And call there place home



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A_Dreamer said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 11:46 am
This was great, usually I don't like these kind of writings, but I liked it, VERY well written. :)
 
MetalChickRock replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 2:18 pm
thank you so much for the comment
 
IvyVine said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 4:45 am
way awesome!
 
MetalChickRock replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 10:01 am
thank you very much
 
jejouegenius said...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 11:41 pm
sometimes dark poems are dark just for the sake of being dark, but this one is actually good
 
MetalChickRock replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 1:25 am
thanks for saying my poem was actually good lol
 
Nikiblue said...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 7:40 pm
Very dark, I liked it. You should try and get the tenses of there and their down though, other than that it was great.
 
MetalChickRock replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 1:25 am
uhhh alright then...thanks
 
Cigg.Sun said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 1:40 pm
Thanks for posting a reply to my fourm.
"Feasting upon there souls,"
This was my favorite line in your poem.
I love the flow & useage of rhyme scheme.
Great job!
-Cigg.Sunn.
 
WaterExplosions replied...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 3:56 pm
thank you very much
 
Volleyballer33 replied...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 6:19 pm
Wow short sweet and amazing ! I loved it
 
MetalChickRock replied...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 6:30 pm
your comment means a lot to me
 
Kestrel replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:40 pm
Kinda dark for my personal taste but a good poem none the less- I like that you used greek mythology as an insperation-I love mythology-i've tried writing some poems inpired by it but never had much success so awesome job!
 
AvengedJasonFold replied...
May 13, 2010 at 5:46 pm

nice job! I like this one

it reminds me of "blackened" by metallica. idk why lmao thats just the first thing i thought of when i read it.

 
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