The Gun

January 13, 2010
By Douglas MacDonald BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
Douglas MacDonald BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
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The finger shot the gun with hate
Sealing the other person’s fate
The hammer hitting the back of the case
The bullet flying through his face
Blood on the ground in splatters and spills
The murderer suddenly gets the chills
The blood on his hands that can’t be cleaned
And from now on he was a fiend
Going to hell at the world’s end
Lucifer his only friend
Repercussions for what he’d done
Hadn’t been seen down the sight of his gun

The author's comments:
I wrote this in hopes that people know of the concequences of their actions

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on Sep. 11 2010 at 12:38 am
TheUnknownGuest GOLD, Woodbridge, Virginia
14 articles 4 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can't remember it clearly, but it went something like this:

"The past is the past, the future is the furture. But now, now is like a gift, which is why it is called present."

This is pretty good

on Feb. 3 2010 at 11:51 am
MaeRenee BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
1 article 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why be miserable?"

awesome! i love this one too!!!


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