The two of us

January 13, 2010
By Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene


What love is,
is me and you,
with us together
you know it's true.

What love is,
is an angels tear
that shed from her eye
and had fell right here.

What love is,
is still brand new,
but with a little help,
it will always be us two.


The author's comments:
I was inspired to write this poem about my first and only true love.

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on Mar. 22 2010 at 9:57 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

I LOVE IT!!! :) wow, this is beautiful. it's so deep, but it has such sweet meaning. i like that it's deep enough to not have the "sappy love" affect on the reader. it's great! :) would you mind checking out some of my work? i love the feedback :) thanks...and 5 stars :)

on Mar. 7 2010 at 2:49 pm
Colorful4u SILVER, Orange, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest compliment, or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around."
-Leo Buscagilia

Nevertheless, keep writing. (:

on Mar. 7 2010 at 2:49 pm
Colorful4u SILVER, Orange, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest compliment, or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around."
-Leo Buscagilia

I really really enjoy this poem, very unique, very beautiful.

on Feb. 26 2010 at 2:57 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
21 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

lol. i love to write poems. i almost had my poem "imaginary" published in a book, but my mom accidently threw it away. it sucked, and thats when i found this website.

on Feb. 25 2010 at 9:38 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

i luv ur work. this is so deep. u definetly, without a doubt in my mind, have a true talent. keep it up!

on Feb. 25 2010 at 7:39 pm
Josie_Hogan BRONZE, Pfafftown, North Carolina
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You have an amazing talent! Keep writingg for suree

on Feb. 25 2010 at 2:55 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
21 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

awwww!!! thx! i try to write all my poems from the heart. this one in particular i gave to my ex for christmas engraved on a plexiglass bar. it looked really cool.

on Feb. 25 2010 at 9:36 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

I agree... it's pretty obvious that you wrote this from the heart!!! thats what inspires others tobe what they are!!!

on Feb. 24 2010 at 2:23 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
21 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

thank you vey much!! it means the world to meh.

on Feb. 23 2010 at 8:46 pm
ReneetheGreat PLATINUM, Castle Rock, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Strength does not come from physical capacity, but from an indomitable will."

You have an amazing talent for writing poems! You will inspire the world with your words one day :)


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