January 13, 2010
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Farther than the eye can see is the sky still blue?
Above all the chaos and fiery fires all I see is you.

Deeper than the farthest space I cannot say my love,
For words are only imaginary like a black unicorn or a purple dove.

So instead of only imagining we write our words of truth,
We put them down on paper like I have for you.

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Laina said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 3:00 pm
I love it! PLEASE keep writing, i want to read more!
Colorful4u This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 10:49 pm
Such creativity, I loved it. Please keep producing wonderful poetry (:
enchanted4yu said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 1:00 am
I really like the imagery here! Great Job
alyssa:)) said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 6:59 pm
this is really good!!!! thx for commenting on my article!!
Kaylamic said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 11:37 am
i like this its cute :D
Pillow said...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 11:17 pm
I like it. It's pretty.
randomstreak(akabrianj) replied...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 11:34 am
this is like a love note with PIZAZZ!!! it's beautiful. i really like how you captured it....and it has PIZAZZ!!! ha ha sorry i really love typin that word in all's my weakness....i'm sorry now i'm just babbling.......well seriously i loved it :) (one last time) PIZAZZ!!! okay i'm done now....
Emokittiycut This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 3:06 pm
lol!! wats really ironic is that its my fav word. i love typing PIZAZZ. its very entertaining. and dont worry bout the babbling part, thats all i do sometimes. half the time ppl r talking to me and ill go in and out of my own little world. but dont worry, they dont kno me there. its awsome. lol! pizazz!!!!
randomstreak(akabrianj) replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 12:13 pm
thank god, i'm not alone. yeah......i go fifty topics an hour......and that's why i like teen ink, it's not like they're going to kill me for babbling. lol. ha ha PIZAZZ. brings a smile to my depressed face every time :)
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