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Her sunken eyes seeing through me with that penetrating look,
Once which were lively enough to rekindle in everyone the joy of childhood.
who used to tell me stories ,
one small incident has ended all her glory.
The face which was jewelled with an elegant smile for everyone to share,
has transformed into an expression of fear and wrinkles running everywhere.
Friends ,foe even passerby her hands gave blessings,to me with her hands she was feeding
now, to pick up her own loaf her hands are quivering.
Enjoying the colors of life,
she is now clad in only white .
Sitting in one corner of the room her lips are sealed,
past memories in her heart are concealed.
once bursting int laughter at my so called jokes,
now doesn't even talk to folks.
When i told her the stories she used to tell,
just one tear from her eye and that said it all.
o!!!! yes the real you is there inside,
I need to find it's just fearing from the world outside.
i don't care if the chore is tough,
you are my diamond in the rough.
i cannot repay whatever you did for me,
but i surely can try,beside you always to be.





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akki said...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 5:56 am
its really really sweet ... :)
 
morena replied...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 6:35 am
thanx finally
 
afris said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 8:04 am
imoticons not needed gr8
 
grave said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 8:01 am
i liked your pom
 
grooving said...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 1:15 am
great dude or gal
 
gracy said...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 1:03 am
gooooood and coool
 
davedf said...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 9:47 pm
you are the best morena send more poems please
 
morena said...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 9:46 pm
thank you very much all of you i'll try to send more
 
surendra said...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 9:44 pm
the idea behind this poem is awesome please send more poems.
 
61born in faith said...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 9:43 pm
you're imagination is wonderful.it's a great poem
 
all closed 2222 said...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 9:40 pm
you ave done a extraordinary job
 
nobody said...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 9:39 pm
great work morena all the best
 
that's right said...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 9:34 pm
i looooove this poem it's beautifully written very well.
 
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